Wednesday, April 19, 2017

Book Review: 'On the Edge of a Very Small Town'

Mark Jackley was a contributor to Issue 4 of Moledro Magazine. In this blog post, I've reviewed his book 'On The Edge of a Very Small Town'. This review has been previously published at Voices of Youth, a UNICEF-based platform. 



In one of the first poems (‘Undertaker’) in his poetry collection ‘On the Edge of a Very Small Town’, Mark Jackley vividly explores the mysteries surrounding death: ‘Once you’re there, death / just isn’t the same, he thinks. / He carefully sews her mouth / to keep the secret in.’ After all, the air of enigma surrounding death continues to baffle and pique the minds of people today. And later on, it made me wonder: rather than deconstructing what we can’t understand, is it better to accept that obscurity can be more appealing than the truth? Should we be grateful that her mouth has been sewn… and that she won’t be able to tell us, the living, what we’re all steadily approaching?

Crisp yet powerful, Mark Jackley’s poems have a tendency to meander into our souls and make us question the minutiae of life. I could never linger on a single emotion while absorbing his words—for the gamut of sensations and sentiments he explores is vast. With honest language and striking imagery, Jackley’s poems prove that simplicity and succinctness can be the greatest virtues of any poem. In ‘On the Edge of a Very Small Town’, a collection of concise and jarring poems, gravity morphs to depth, which seamlessly turns into something akin to joy and lightheartedness.

There is poignancy in the mix, as well. ‘The Camera’ is a touching poem about poverty, and the effects it can have on peoples’ spirits: ‘The poor are mostly joyless / in old pictures— / too tired or too proud / to fake it when somebody / points to another / machine and says, “Smile.”’ We’re enmeshed in a world of media and artifice; and sure enough, it can be rare to see raw displays of emotion. But that’s what we see when we see pictures of the poor: unhappiness that was born from life struggles, happiness that is not motivated by a desire to look beautiful or seductive. It’s hard to tell if a camera can truly capture the essence of a moment; but Jackley’s poem showed me that it depends on the people who are being photographed, as opposed to the dexterity of the photographer.

Jackley’s poems embrace universal themes, and are hence relatable to anyone who picks up his book and dives in. And yet, he explores these themes with a unique twist; for instance, take his poem ‘Happiness’, which uses words like ‘dark’, ‘bound with tape’, and ‘hostage’, but still manages to paint an exceedingly powerful image of the emotion we all seek:

‘Sometimes it rises quietly
like water in the basement.

It may soften something
you’ve lugged around for years,
stored in the dark,
bound with tape, whose mouth

you sealed, a thing you were
unable to unwilling
to let go of, so

it held you hostage too.’

Regardless of who we are or where we grew up, we will still be able to appreciate the brilliant tones of Jackley’s poetry. From using Chinese takeout boxes (in ‘To my next love’) to depict love to describing the sun as setting fire to the heads of flowers (in ‘Reading in the car in a parking lot at dawn’), Jackley encourages us to view mundane world events in creative, divergent ways. ‘On the Edge of a Very Small Town’ is a wonderful mélange of conflicting and harmonious emotions, a miscellany of simple words that have the ability to evoke the most complex feelings.

Saturday, April 1, 2017

Crescent

My poem was published in 'For The Sonorous', an online magazine founded by Masfi Khan! 


fell off a swing, woodchips sewed themselves
into my pink flesh. my eyes squeezed shut because
they feared blood, mother’s mystical fingers
alleviated the sting, stitched the wound with
the faded face of Barbie and told me to never fear
climbing the clouds to reach the stars.

moonlight kissed my face, mother told me that
regardless of where you live, the moon’s glow
will always be the same. moved. saw the culture
I knew recede into the horizon as the plane sliced
the amber skies. landed in a realm where breathing
was difficult, smoke from vehicles concealed the

moon’s innocent shine. so I relied on the soft face of
mother to give me the light I had lost, her smile the
crescent this country had stolen from the heavens. until
a little girl, my sister, almost died and I realized how much
blood a body can contain. saw mother’s crescent turn
upside-down, eyes that reflected sunlight donning

waterfalls, constellations shatter into fragments too
far to see from the earth. the little girl is alive, happy,
beautiful. I chart maps that describe destruction, realize
that every disturbance comes with casualties, meteors
that burn. except not all losses are visible, some just a
loss of heat, a fire that blazed too long and needs to rest.